A CELEBRATION OF POETRY

 

Ideas for Teachers

from

Jemez Springs Public Library

 

 

Judith Isaacs and John Cook, editors

 

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Annual Jemez Springs Public Library

Celebration of National Poetry Week

April 2005

 

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This booklet is available online at http://www.jemezsprings.org

Jemez Springs Public Library

P. O. Box 479, 30 Jemez Plaza

Jemez Springs, NM 87025

505-829-9155; librarian@ jemezsprings.org

 

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How and Why They Teach

In the following, some teachers share their thoughts and ideas on teaching poetry.

J. C. Todd:

At first, I like to offer poems in quantity, 40 or so poem opportunities for a class of 25. That might mean a tape recorder with earphones and a few spoken-word cassettes. Brief poems on the board or flip chart. Poem-posters. Fifteen or so individual poems and 20 poetry journals and books. On the Internet, I log on to Poetry Daily or another poetry source. If I have a VCR, I show a poet reading on video. I want a critical mass that gets attention. Poems everywhere, displayed with wit and whimsy.

Betty Lies:

Fill the room with poetry. Read a poem at the beginning of class, not to analyze, but just to listen to. Encourage students to bring in poems they love, to give to the class, either by reading aloud or putting up on the walls. Read poems that share some theme with other parts of the curriculum. Find poems that speak to events that are going on in the school, the community, the world.

Karen Banks:

I teach poetry for a very selfish reason: I love it. I love the way the words feel in my mouth when I read a poem to my students; the sound of it in my ears and the silence in the room; the sight of lines and white space and faces lost in thought; and the immeasurable joy of sharing a moment of truth with an unseen and unknown person and 30 amazed and astonished teenagers.

I first have students bring all of their preconceived notions to the table. I ask them to take five minutes to respond to the following journal prompts:

1. Poetry is …

2.The subject(s) or theme(s) of poetry is...

3. I think poetry...

4. I wish poetry...

We then create a list of some of the responses, which, in and of itself, stimulates a lively discussion on their conflicting views.

Doug Goetsch:

Jane Hirshfield (poet and essayist) identifies the two stumbling blocks to effective writing as unwillingness to reveal the self and not knowing the tools of the trade. Every exercise I use is designed to work on one of these stumbling blocks. I use a battery of free-writing exercises to coax students into revealing the self. If they write freely, and frequently, they are likely at some point to startle themselves, and that moment is usually the seed of a good poem. As for the tools of the trade, I start with accurate physical description. I find that precision in description leads to precision in other areas -- diction, thought, emotion, even rhythm. The other thing I do is write with them – always.

How kids progress in the arts is often anything but logical and systematic. So I also go at things unsystematically, showing them as many different models and ways of writing as possible. The sequencing probably isn’t that important . . . There’s more than one way up the mountain, there’s no rush, and they don’t have to be good -- though they’re usually very good.

Richard K. Weems:

My class is open for discussion. Sometimes we write things in our private notebooks. I tell my students, "Write a poem you will never show anyone else to someone you would never normally write a poem to." It never fails that they want to read aloud these poems they never want to show anyone else. Sometimes we combine our efforts onto poster board and make group poems we can all take credit for. Once we made pop-up books, inspired by Nick Bantock’s pop-up version of Kubla Khan. . . . Each day I have each student tell me something he or she liked from someone else’s work.

 

Fooling with Words with Bill Moyers: Teaching Strategies

http://www.pbs.org/wnet/foolingwithwords/ts.html

 

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12 More Ways to Teach Poetry

Ten minutes’ silent reading of poetry on regular basis.

Build lesson on poetry based on something in a textbook.

Students copy poems on word processor and post in the classroom.

Students copy poems by hand, individually or in a group and post.

Students, individually or in small groups, make a poetry notebook.

Students in small groups read poems to each other.

Pairs of students read a poem by each reading an alternating line.

Play word games like Scattergories.

Students read poems chorally before a video camera.

Post a poem of the day.

Display poems in a special section of your school or classroom and invite others to come and enjoy them.

Set aside time for a class poetry reading where children can share their individual poems with one another, invited parents, and/or another class in your school.

 

 

 

 

 

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The Writing Process

 

PREWRITE/EXPLORE

Generate all the ideas you have on your topic. This will give you lots of material and information from which to start writing.

Methods: Webbing, listing, talking, visualization.

ORGANIZE/WRITE THE FIRST DRAFT

Select the ideas you want to include and decide in what order you will present them.

Methods: Connect or number ideas from web; list in order of logical sequence; make an outline of main ideas or categories; use inverted pyramid model.

Write a first draft, roughly following the organization you chose. Release all the information you have in your head about this topic.

Method: Free-write without worrying about word choice, sentence structure, paragraphs or grammar.

REVISE/REWRITE

Go over the first draft and ask if it says what you want it to. Rewrite sentences and check paragraphs. Rewrite everything if necessary, or cut and paste. Revise until you are satisfied. Get feedback from others.

Methods: Writers' conferences; read aloud; use a checklist; review statement of purpose.

EDIT

Polish the final draft. Refine sentence structure and word choice. Check spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.

Methods: Peer editing; use a checklist; allow a cooling-off period before final edit. Consult reference books (dictionary, style guide, grammar text); computer spelling/style .

PROOFREAD/PUBLISH

Share your writing with others.

Methods: Get a friend or teacher to proofread. Share through author’s chair;, post on bulletin board or web site;, share with one other person or small group;, make a book; send to a friend via snail mail or email.

Adapted from The Writing Process developed by Cascade Mountain Writers, 1985.

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Colors: A Beginning Poetry Lesson

Overview: This lesson introduces the use of imagery in poems and is designed to help beginning poets produce a short poem with a high degree of success using a prescribed format.

Objectives: In this activity, students will

Create a visual representation of a poetic idea.

Produce an original, four-line poem using a prescribed format.

Materials

Paper and pencil for each child

One sheet of white art paper, any size, for each child

Crayons, colored pencils or markers for the group

Procedure

1. Ask students to think of a color and to picture that color. They should try to picture it someplace where it may not be seen. They should record their ideas using the following fill in the blanks:

(color) (sensory verb) like the/a (nature idea)

For example,

Green feels like the bottom of the sea OR

Gray tastes like the rain

Encourage students to use sensory verbs other than "look"

2. Ask students to make a drawing using their color. Encourage them to include lots of detail (but see step 8 below). Point out that their color may only be a small detail of the drawing but that this will make it even more interesting than if they make their drawing mostly that color.

3. Using the idea format and the drawing, students are to write a poem using the following poem format:

Line 1: Have you ever (sensory verb) the/a (nature idea)

Line 2: (statement about color, observation or question about nature idea)

Line 3: (different statement, observation or question)

Line 4: (color) (sensory verb) like (nature idea)

For example,

Have you ever tasted the rain?

It’s gray like the sky on a rainy day.

It feels cool on my tongue.

Gray tastes like the rain.

4. Revise poems by asking students if there are any words they can leave out without changing the meaning.

5. Publish by pasting poem lines onto drawings.

6. Have students share their published work in small groups or with class as a whole, perhaps in an Author’s Chair format. Display on the classroom walls if possible.

Adapted from a lesson by Joanna Daniel

 

 

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Eye Spy

Grade level: 4-8

 

Objectives: Students will be able to

list descriptive words

create an original poem

Instructions:

Use a magnifying glass to examine your skin. Choose a spot to focus on and then draw what you see.

As you draw, write single words or short phrases about what you see.

Write a short poem using the words that you wrote down.

 

This lesson was used by 8th grade teacher David Grimes in a previous poetry contest. We weren’t able to find an Internet reference.

 

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Rhyming Words Activities

Grade level: K-3

1. Recognize Rhyming Words. Children identify words that rhyme in a series of activities. For example, "Put your thumbs up if these two words rhyme--pail-tail or cow-pig?" or "Finish this rhyme, red, bed, blue, ______."

2. Snap and Clap Rhymes. Begin with a simple clap and snap rhythm. Get more complex as children move along in rhyming.

Clap Clap Snap fall Clap Clap Snap ball
Clap Clap Snap hall Clap Clap Snap small

A variation is the "I say, You say" game:

I say fat. You say _____. I say red. You say _____.

3. Rhyming Word Sit Down. Children walk around in a big circle taking one step each time a rhyming word is said by the teacher. When the teacher says a word that doesn’t rhyme, the children sit down:

she tree flea spree key bee sea went

Rhyming words in songs, poems, and big books. As you do shared reading with the students, pause at the end of phrases and let the students supply the rhyming words. After you have read a poem together ask students to find the rhyming words. Generate other words that rhyme with these rhyming words.

 

 

Patti’s Electronic Classroom

TEAMS Distance Learning Electronic Classrooms, Los Angeles County Board of Education

http://teams.lacoe.edu/documentation/classrooms/patti/k-1/activities/rhyming.html

 

 

 

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Poetry Cubes

Grade Level: Any

Overview: This lesson can be used with holidays, seasons, or themes to show how diverse and exciting poetry can be.

Purpose: To develop an appreciation for different styles of poetry. It is also an excellent way to introduce a holiday, season, or theme. Students will also learn different techniques for memorization.

Objectives: Students will be able to:

Cooperate with other members of the group to read and develop a way to present a poem.

Demonstrate speaking and acting skills in front of an audience.

Memorize and recite a poem.

Materials:

Poems that illustrate the theme.

Milk cartons with the bottom cut out. Cut the bottoms off to create the size needed and put poems on all sides.

Procedures:

One person in the group rolls the dice to see which poem their group will be working on.

They can then do one of two things to present their poem to the class. Choral-read the poem or act the poem out in front of the class.

After they have been given time to practice, each group presents its poem.

When all presentations are over, students engage in different activities over the next couple of days to help them memorize their poem.

Examples:

Have the poem on sentence strips and orally recite the poem over and over, covering up different words after each time until the whole poem is covered.

Put poems on sentence strips for the students to put in order.

Write the poem in their best handwriting. Illustrate.

By Beth Hevern

Columbia Education Center—Teacher Developed Lesson Plans

http://www.col-ed.org/cur/lang/lang50.txt

 

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Poetry Room

Grades K-6

Have students work in pairs. Each pair should choose an object in the library or classroom to decorate with poetry – a table leg, table top, section of floor, book shelf, chair back – anything is fair game. Each pair will measure the area and cut paper to fit the size and shape. Then each pair will design a poem about the object they are decorating. They will attach each poem with tape or other non-destructive fixative.

From Rhymes and Reasons: Librarians and Teachers Using Poetry to Foster Literacy by Jane Heitman; Linworth Publishing, Inc., 2003.

 

 

 

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Poetry Quilt

Grades K-6

Materials needed: 10" construction paper squares, art supplies, tape.

Cut 36 pieces of construction paper into 10" squares of various colors. Give each student one square. Help students use library and Web resources to find a poem that they like. Students decorate their squares with the poem and appropriate artwork, using art supplies and computer programs. Students sign their names to their square. Tape the poems together on the back so that the front resembles a quilt pattern. Display on the wall or bulletin board.

Extension: Students may use library and Web resources to find information about quilt patterns and try their quilt in a simple pattern.

(Adaptation of Mood Quilt, p. 97)

 

From Rhymes and Reasons: Librarians and Teachers Using Poetry to Foster Literacy by Jane Heitman; Linworth Publishing, Inc., 2003.

 

 

 

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Animal Poetry

Grade level: 1+

Brainstorm with the students some facts about one of the animals they have studied or seen at the zoo. Write these facts and descriptions on a chart in front of the class (tiger, huge cat, gold and black, loud roar, large padded feet, rubbing against a lonely tree, prowling around habitat).

The entire group helps the teacher till in the blanks of a poetry form (below).

Tiger!

You have a roar like thunder

You are fuzzy, gold, and black

You roam around on padded feet

You scratch your back on a lonely tree

You are the biggest cat I have ever seen

You are my favorite animal because you look so lovable

Tiger!

Next, the class is divided into cooperative groups and each group selects an animal.

The students brainstorm facts about the animal they have chosen. One of the students is the scribe and makes a list of the ideas. After all the facts are listed, the most descriptive details are selected or modified and put into the poetry pattern.

(Name of animal)

You

You

You

You

You

You are my favorite animal because you

(Name of animal)

 

(The class is taking facts and fitting them into the form. This pattern can be used to review facts about any topic.)

Adapted from a lesson plan by Susan W. Hixson

Columbia Education Center—Teacher Developed Lesson Plans

http://www.col-ed.org/cur/lang/lang59.txt

 

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Acrostics

Grades: K-6 (easily adapted for older students)

An acrostic begins with a word spelled out. Then each letter of the word is used to begin another word or phrase, creating a poem. Acrostic poems creatively reinforce letter recognition, spelling and vocabulary. In addition, the acrostic activities below help students evaluate tests and apply conventional language skills.

Acrostic poems can be created as a group or by individual students. Have students write their names, one letter on each line of notebook paper, one letter beneath the other. Then have them write a word or phrase beside each letter that begins with that letter and describes them.

Example:

JANE

Joyful

Animated

Neighborly

Energetic

Variations:

Use acrostics in content areas by choosing a word related to a specific subject, such as a science term, animal, historical figure or literature character.

Use seasonal words (spring, fall), holiday words (Valentine, Halloween), days of the week or months of the year.

Ask students to "act out" their acrostics, using their bodies to make the shape of the initial letter, then acting out the words they have chosen.

Collaborate with the computer technician to create computer-graphically enhanced acrostics.

 

From Rhymes and Reasons: Librarians and Teachers Using Poetry to Foster Literacy by Jane Heitman; Linworth Publishing, Inc., 2003.

 

 

 

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How to Write a Cinquain

Grade level: 1+

At the most basic level a cinquain is a five-line poem or stanza. Here are two variations.

1.

Line 1 - a one-word title

Line 2 - a two-word phrase that describes your title or you can just use two words

Line 3 - a three-word phrase that describes an action relating to your title or just action words

Line 4 - a four-word phrase that describes a feeling relating to your topic or just feeling words

Line 5 - one word that refers back to your title

2.

Line 1 - two syllables
Line 2 - four syllables
Line 3 - six syllables
Line 4 - eight syllables
Line 5 - two syllables

Some examples of cinquain by 4th – 6th graders:

Baseball

Team challenge

Hitting, running, throwing

Each inning, new chance

Excitement

Rainbow

Arch of color

Reaching, asking, joining

Blue, purple, red, green

Beauty

 

 

Can Teach

http://www.canteach.ca/elementary/poetry5.html

 

 

Cake

wonderful delight

arrangement of chocolate

happiness

Birthday

Parents

Crazy, bothersome

Fussy, demanding, punishing

"Clean up your room!"

Adults

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Knowing Ourselves and Others Through Poetry

Grade Level: 6- 12

Purpose: Getting to know students and getting them to know themselves through writing.

Objective(s):

Beyond the stated purpose, students become more familiar with word usage; synonyms, the degrees(s) of emotion contained in words and the manipulation of language to impact meaning.

Procedures:

1. Begin a discussion of what feelings and emotions are. Then ask each to student write a word which describes how he or she feels today. Use this sentence: "Today I feel (emotion) because (give reason)." Explain that it is possible to have more than one emotion or feeling at the same time, either similar or opposite.

Example: Today I feel worried because we are having a test. Also, I feel happy because today is Friday.

2. To help students examine emotions more closely, use this exercise: After brainstorming a list of emotions, ask students to choose one and assign it a color. "Hate is black," or "Happiness is yellow." Use the following to further explore:

(Emotion) is (color). Fear is red.
It smells like It smells like fire.
It tastes like It tastes like rotten peaches.
It sounds like It sounds like car horns.
It feels like It feels like being scared of dark.
It looks like It looks like Freddy Krueger.
(Emotion) is Fear is falling into a hole.

(give a metaphoric statement)

 

An Educator’s Desk Reference Lesson Plan by Missy Kasbaum

http://www.eduref.org/cgi-bin/printlessons.cgiand/Virtual/Lessons/Language_Arts/Writing/WCP0018.html

 

 

 

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Auto-Bio Poem

Grade Level: 3-12

Overview: This activity is especially fun in the beginning of the year when we all need to get to know each other.

Purpose: In this lesson, the writer analyzes self to provide an introduction to the rest of the class.

Objectives: To analyze, to inform, to introduce.

Materials:

Paper and pencil

Sample autobio poem which teacher has written in advance of class

Procedures: Students write an eleven-line autobio pocm after hearing/seeing the teacher’s model. Following is an example.

Line I: Your first name Nancy

Line 2: Four descriptive traits Honest, caring, curious, energetic

Line 3: Sibling of... Sister of Kenneth

Line 4: Lover of (people, ideas) Lover of laughter, learning, challenge

Line 5: Who feels... Who feels joy when traveling

Line 6: Who needs… Who needs sunshine every day

Line 7: Who gives… Who gives friendship, encouragement, and smiles

Line 8: Who fears... Who fears pain, hunger, and the end of summer

Line 9: Who would like to see... Who would like to see contentment for all living things

Line 10: Resident of (your city) Resident of Phoenix

Line 11: Your last name Haugen

 

An Educator’s Reference Desk Lesson Plan by Nancy Haugen

http://eduref.org/cgi-bin/printlessons.cgi/Virtual/Lessons/Language_Arts/Writing/WCP0003.html

 

 

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Writing "W" Poems

Grade Level: 4, 5

Description: This lesson is designed to give students a new or different way to write a poem. It is more structured than just telling students to write a poem, so some students may find they like this type of poem writing.

Goal: Students will discover a new way to write a poem by using who, what, when, where, and why to write their poems.

Objectives: Students will be able to:

1. Identify what each of the five "W"s represent.

2. Write and edit their "W" poems.

Materials:

1. Animalia by Graeme Base

2. A Light In the Attic by Shel Silverstein

3. Overhead

4. Letters of the alphabet in a hat (one letter per student if possible)

Procedures:

Pre-Writing Activity

1. Today we are each going to write a poem of our own, but before we do, I am going to read Animalia to you (read Animalia and point out that it begins with a poem, and read the poem to the students).

2. You are each going to write a poem using a specific letter of the alphabet. Tomorrow after we have written our poems, we will use our poems to make a class book, kind of like Animalia.

3. For our class book we are going to write a certain type of poem called the W poem. Put up overhead with the following information:

Five W’s:

Line 1: Who (the subject)

Line 2: What (what happened)

Line 3: Where (where did it happen)

Line 4: When (when did it happen)

Line 5: Why (why did it happen)

 

4. Here is a poem that I wrote using the letter X, and the five W’s. The who is Xavier. The what is played his xylophone, etc. Put the following poem on the overhead:

Who: Xavier

What: Played his xylophone

Where: In the examining room

When: In his spare time

Why: While waiting for his x-rays

5. In order to read this poem, we need to cover up the five W’s (do so with a piece of paper). Read the poem without the five W’s.

6. When you write your poem, you may put the five W’s on the side of your page, but then for your final draft you must take them off, and write just your poem.

7. Remember to capitalize the beginning of every line.

8. Now we will do one as a class. What letter should we use? (Let students pick a letter to use, and write it at the top of the overhead) Who has a who, or a subject for me? Write this on the overhead, and then continue until all five W’s are answered. Cover up the Five W’s, and ask for a volunteer to read the class poem.

9. Now I will let you draw a letter out of a hat. The letter you get is the letter you keep, no trading.

During Writing Activity

1. I will leave the five W’s up on the overhead for you to look at while you write your poems.

2. You may use your friends, your dictionaries, your thesauruses, and your teacher to find words if you get stuck.

3. You all have your letters, so you may start writing your poems.

 

 

 

 

An Educator’s Reference Desk Lesson Plan by Kathi Twiselton

http://www.eduref.org/cgi-bin/printlessons.cgi/Virtual/Lessons/Language_Arts/Writing/WCP0038.html

 

 

 

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Knoxville, Tennessee - Poem Model

Grade Level: 6 - 12

 

Description: After reading the poem "Knoxville, Tennessee" by Nikki Giovanni, students will use the poem as a model to write poems of their own. (See appendix for poem.)

Goal: To write a poem of their own creation, using Giovanni's as a model.

Objectives: Students will be able to

review and demonstrate knowledge of the poetic concept of "speaker"

identify specific phrases in the poem that identify the speaker of the poem.

identify words and phrases in the poem that indicate the speaker's attitude about the season of summer.

write a poem, imitating the form and language of the model poem.

Materials:

Text of a poem by Nikki Giovanni, "Knoxville, Tennessee".

Other sample poems which imitate the original poem

Plain white paper or construction paper.

Procedure:

As a class, read the poem together.

After reading the poem, define the term "poetic speaker" (the persona the author assumes in a given poem).

Determine as a class the age, gender, etc. of the speaker of "Knoxville, Tennessee" by identifying phrases from the poem that would indicate the identity of the speaker.

Discuss the words and phrases in the poem that show the speaker's attitude toward the season of summer.

Discuss the form of the poem--note items such as punctuation and word placement in the free verse poem. How do these things add to the identity of the speaker and the speaker's attitude?

The student's written assignment is to write a poem of their own about their favorite season, using the poem they just read as a model. They are to keep the free verse form and the first two lines similar: "I always like (season) best". Also, they should imitate Giovanni's free verse form, using placement of words for emphasis and similar punctuation.

 

An Educator's Reference Desk Lesson Plan by Monica Wagner

http://www.eduref.org/Virtual/Lessons/Language_Arts/Writing/WCP0063.html

 

 

 

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Couplets

A couplet is a two-line stanza that rhymes.

Objectives:

The student will recognize the end-rhyme pattern of a couplet.

The student will write and illustrate a couplet.

Materials:

A copy of the following:

Adventures of Isabel by Ogden Nash (see appendix)

Eletelephony by Laura E. Richards (see appendix)

Excerpt from The Tempest by William Shakespeare (see appendix)

Index cards

The poems may be written on the overhead or individual copies may be given to the students.

Procedures:

Introduction: Read Adventures of Isabel. Ask the students what they notice about the poem. (It is not true. It is funny. Every two lines rhyme.) Explain that couplets are two-line stanzas that rhyme.

Group Practice: Display Eletelephony on the overhead. Point out to the students that when the author needed rhyming words she just made them up! Display the excerpt from The Tempest on the overhead. Explain that couplets can also be serious. Have the class read the passage aloud noting the end rhymes. Brainstorm school words and words that rhyme with them.

Independent Practice: Give each child an index card. Have them write a couplet about school.

Closure: Ask students read their couplets aloud to make one long poem about school. Type a compiled list of couplets for the students to place in their poetry folder.

 

 

 

 

By Kim Iraggi & Montie Sisco

Lesson 3 of Poetry Plus: An Integrated Unit (adapted)

http://www.coreknowledge.org/CKproto2/resrcs/lessons/399Poetry.pdf

 

 

 

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Concrete Poem

Grade Level: K-4

 

Concrete poems combine visual art with writing.  Poetry or words describing the object are written on the page to form the picture.  We tied this into our science unit on trees.  Older students could include more detailed information to demonstrate content knowledge.

  u           b          
b   p t     m            
  a   r   i              
    r e l                
      e         float        
      b                  
      a                  
      r   fall       crackle      
  dry   k         rustle

pile

crisp    
                         

To create a concrete poem:

select a topic and a simple object to represent it

list descriptive words and phrases

draw a basic outline of the object with a black crayon or marker

place a white sheet of paper over the outline and create the shape poem by writing words along the lines of your drawing or filling in the shape with the poetry

Here’s another example from NASAexplores:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Background Information:  
Concrete poetry is an artistic expression of written language. Concrete poets make designs out of letters and words. Even though the visual pattern (shape) can really catch our eye, it is the language itself that makes a poem poetic.  

1. Read the NASAexplores K-4 article "Paving The Way."

2. Say to the students, "There are different kinds of concrete poetry. We will try a type of concrete poetry that combines two couplets with a visual image. A couplet has two lines in which each line ends with words that rhyme."

 

3. Display the example on the board:

A click, a sputter, a whoosh—to roar! Line 1
A flick, a shudder, a push—to soar! Line 2
The wings held steady; the nose held high; Line 3
The plane is ready to touch the sky! Line 4

4. Tell the students, "In the first two lines, the words roar and soar rhyme. In the second two lines, the words high and sky rhyme. Lines one and two form the first couplet. Lines three and four form the second couplet. These are then grouped on the page in such a way that it appears the plane is starting its engines, moving down the runway and then lifting up into the sky."

5. Display:

 

 

 

 

6. Display the completed concrete poem:

 

 

7. Have students create concrete poems.

 

 

 

 

http://w3.trib.com/~johnbn/poetry/celeb.htm

http://www.nasaexplores.nasa.gov/show_k4_teacher_st.php?id=030110154711

 

 

 

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A Fun Way to Teach Similes

When I was a student, I understood that poets sometimes used similes to describe sunsets, clouds, and snowflakes, but I didn’t really care. I never got in the habit of using metaphors and similes in my writing (and speaking) until I began writing poetry.

I recently wrote a poem about similes, which was published in Lighten Up! that seems to crack kids up. After they read it, they start to understand the power of similes. If you use tired, old similes, you sound corny and predictable. If you use fresh, new similes, you sound clever and witty—which is a pretty good reason for any kid to use fresh similes whenever possible. Here’s the poem:

Predictable

As poor as a churchmouse.

As strong as an ox,

As cute as a button,

As smart as a fox.

As thin as a toothpick,

As white as a ghost,

As fit as a fiddle,

As dumb as a post.

As bald as an eagle,

As neat as a pin,

As proud as a peacock,

As ugly as sin.

When people are talking

you know what they’ll say

as soon as you hear them

begin a cliché.

©1998 Bruce Lansky, reprinted from Lighten Up! with permission of Meadowbrook Press

When I first read this poem to kids, I was struck by the fact that it made kids laugh. Apparently, some kids have never heard these expressions, even though they are as old as the proverbial hills. Although some of the similes will be familiar to your students, I think they’ll understand that using boring, predictable similes makes the speaker (or writer) boring and predictable.

 

With that established, here’s the creative exercise: Reproduce this poem for your students without the last word in each line. Have them fill in the blanks. Their assignment is to complete at least one stanza with fresh, new similes that use the following rhythm and rhyme pattern:

da DUM da da DUM da (A)

da DUM da da DUM (B)

da DUM da da DUM da ©

da DUM da da DUM (B)

To make it easy for you and your students, here’s the altered poem (now titled "Clever").

Clever

As poor as a

As strong as an

As cute as a

As smart as

As thin as a

As white as a,

As fit as a

As dumb as a

As bald as an

As neat as a

As proud as a

As ugly as

Use fresh similes

when you speak and you write,

so your friends will think you are

quite clever and bright.

Before you offer this project to your students, why not try it yourself? Share your results with your students.

 

 

By Bruce Lansky

http://www.poetryteachers.com/poetclass/lessons/teachsimiles.html

 

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Recognizing Poetry in Popular Music

Grade level: 7-8

Objectives:

To appreciate and recognize poetry and poetic language in popular music

To see a use for poetry in modern life

Directions: Each student or pair of students chooses an appropriate song. (No sexual or violent content.) They copy down the words, and make enough copies for each student in the class. Then, each student, or pair of students gives a presentation to the class. They identify the similes, metaphors, alliteration, figurative language or written words that appeal to the five senses. They interpret the song and state what they feel is the theme or purpose for writing the song. They identify if the song entertains, informs or reveals hidden information.

By Christine A Fitzgerald

Tips for Teaching Poetry from Poetic Power, 2:2

http://www.poeticpower.com/plugs4

 

 

 

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Rap It Up!

Grades K-6

Materials needed: Audiotape of rap beat

Students are familiar with rap music, which depends on its beat and heavy bass. Collaborate with your music teacher to find a rap beat background (such as those found on electronic keyboards) or play instrumental music with a rap beat. (The band, DC Talk, is one example.) Play it for students and say nonsense words (da-da-DUM or tra-la-LA, for example) to the beat. Keep the beat playing and have students write their own rap about something they are studying. Have students perform their raps when they are done.

From Rhymes and Reasons: Librarians and Teachers Using Poetry to Foster Literacy by Jane Heitman; Linworth Publishing, Inc., 2003.

 

 

 

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Quatrain

A quatrain is a four-line rhyming poem. This lesson introduces the AABB, ABAB, and ABCB patterns of poetry.

Objectives:

1. The student will recognize the AABB. ABAB, and ABCB patterns.

2. The student will write a quatrain using one of the three rhyming patterns.

Materials:

1. Copies for the overhead projector or individual copies of the following poems:

The Crocodile by Lewis Carroll (see appendix)

Jimmy Jet and His TV Set by Shel Silverstein (see appendix)

2. Sentence strips with the following lines written on one each:

I like candy.

I think it’s dandy.

It’s good to eat.

It’s just too sweet!

It’s my favorite.

3. Five envelopes containing quatrains cut into individual lines.

Procedures:

1. Introduction: Have four students come to the front and hold the sentence strips so that the poem reads:

I like candy. (A)

I think it’s dandy. (A)

It’s good to eat. (B)

It’s just too sweet. (B)

Put the letters A, B and C on the board. Have the students name the first pair of rhyming words and write them under the letter "A." Write the second pair of rhyming words under" B." Point out the AABB pattern to students.

Rearrange the students holding the strips so that the poem reads:

I like candy. ( A)

It’s good to eat. (B)

I think it’s dandy. (A)

It’s just too sweet! (B)

 

Ask the class to describe the new pattern. Exchange "I think it’s dandy" for "It’s my favorite" so the poem reads:

I like candy. (A)

It’s good to eat. (B)

It’s my favorite (C)

It’s just too sweet! (B)

Group Practice: Give each team an envelope containing five individual lines and have them put it together in patterns:

I like to drink pop. (A)

I just can’t stop! (A)

I always drink diet. (B)

I want you to try it! (B)

I like to drink pop. (A)

I always drink diet. (B)

I just can’t stop. (A)

I want you to try it! (B)

I like to drink pop (A)

I always drink diet. (B)

Zero calories (C)

I want you to try it! (B)

Review overhead poems and name their patterns.

 

 

by Kim Iraggi & Montie Sisco

Lesson 4 of Poetry Plus: An Integrated Unit

http://www.coreknowledge.org/CKproto2/resrcs/lessons/399Poetry.pdf

 

 

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Diamante

Grade level: 4-12

Students may tell you that a Diamante is a style of car by Mitsubishi, but before it was ever an automobile, it was a seven-line, diamond-shaped poem based on contrasting words:

Winter

white and silver

fading, sleeping, slowing down

March exchanges vows with April

nodding, rising, waking up

green and goldburst

Spring

When you write your poem, follow this outline to create a diamond shape.

Line 1:

topic (noun)

Line 2: two adjectives

Line 3: three action words

Line 4: a four - word phrase

Line 5: three action words

Line 6: two adjectives

Line 7: rename

the topic

 

Writing Activity:

Choose a word pair from the list of opposites generated during the class discussion as the focus for your poem. Alternately, you may choose a word from one of the other lists we created while discussing an assignment and choose a synonym for this word for your second word.

As you write, check the lists of powerful words that we've compiled for descriptive words that you can add to your poem. Remember that powerful, passionate words will make the contrast. Your finished diamante should capture the powerful relationship between the two words that you've chosen as your focus.

 

 

http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson258/Power_assignment.pdf

http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson258/diamante_cheat.pdf

 

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Memorial Day Poster Poem

Social Studies/Language Arts

Children create a Memorial Day word web and use it to create a poem about Memorial Day.

What You Need

Writing paper and pencils

Poster paper

Crayons and markers

Cluster word web

What to Do

Hold a discussion about the meaning of Memorial Day and why we observe the holiday in the United States. Explain that this is a special day set aside for all Americans to remember the people who have died in wars. Originally, the holiday was called Decoration Day because people decorated the graves of soldiers who died in the Civil War with flags and flowers. Today communities across the nation hold parades and lay wreaths on monuments to those people who died in different wars. People remember the bravery of those soldiers who died fighting for their country.

Have children work in pairs filling in the Cluster Word Web with ideas related to Memorial Day.

They can review the words in the web and underline the best words for their poems.

Have children write the first draft and share it with their partner.

Then they can revise their poems, making suggested changes and checking spelling and punctuation. Remind children that poems can be powerful if they use colorful words, or if they have interesting sounds or rhymes.

Have children reprint the final draft of the poem neatly on poster paper and illustrate it.

 

Houghton Mifflin Education Place

http://www.eduplace.com/activity/memorial.html

 

 

 

Bibliography

WWW

Forms of Poetry for Children

http://falcon.jmu.edu/~ramseyil/poeform.htm

Can Teach

http://www.canteach.ca/

Thirty Days of Poetry–Teacher Page

http://www.msrogers.com/English2/poetry/30_Days_of_Poetry-Teacher_Page.htm

Columbia Education Center--Teacher-Developed Lesson Plans—Language Arts

http://www.col-ed.org/cur/index.html#Lang

The Educator’s Reference Desk—Language Arts

http://eduref.org/cgi-bin/lessons.cgi/Language_Arts

Fooling with Words with Bill Moyers: Teaching Strategies

http://www.pbs.org/wnet/foolingwithwords/ts.html

Giggle Poetry

http://www.gigglepoetry.com

Poetry Daily

http://www.poems.com/

ProTeacher – Poetry

http://www.proteacher.com/070034.shtml#

The Teacher’s Corner—Poetry

http://www.lessonplansearch.com/Thematic_Units/Poetry/

 

BOOKS

There are too many good books of children’s poetry to list. Following are books referenced in this document:

Base, Graeme. Animalia. New York: Harry N Abrams. 1987.

Lansky, Bruce, ed. Bad Case of the Giggles: Kids’ Favorite Funny Poems. Deephaven, MN: Meadowbrook Press.

Lansky, Bruce, ed. Kids Pick the Funniest Poems. Deephaven, MN: Meadowbrook Press.

Nash, Ogden. The Adventures of Isabel. Boston: Joy Street Books. 1991.

Silverstein, Shel. A Light in the Attic. New York: Harper & Row. 1981.

Silverstein, Shel. Where the Sidewalk Ends. New York: Harper & Row. 1974.

Silverstein, Shel. Falling Up: Poems & Drawings. New York: HarperCollins. 1996.

Soto, Gary. A Fire in My Hand: A Book of Poems. New York: Scholastic. 1990.

 

APPENDIX

Knoxville, Tennessee

I always like summer

best

you can eat fresh corn

from daddy’s garden

and okra

and greens

and cabbage

and lots of

barbecue

and buttermilk

and homemade ice-cream

at the church picnic

and listen to

gospel music

outside

at the church

homecoming

and go to the mountains with

your grandmother

and go barefooted

and be warm

all the time

not only when you go to bed

and sleep

--Nikki Giovanni

 

 

Eletelephony

Once there was an elephant,
Who tried to use the telephant -
No! No! I mean an elephone
Who tried to use the telephone -
(Dear me! I am not certain quite
That even now I've got it right.)

Howe'er it was, he got his trunk
Entangled in the telephunk;
The more he tried to get it free,
The louder buzzed the telephee -
(I fear I'd better drop the song
Of elephop and telephong!)

 -- Laura E. Richards

 

Ariel’s song from The Tempest

Full fathom five thy father lies

Of his bones are coral made

Those are pearls that were his eyes

Nothing of him that doth fade

But doth suffer a sea change

Into something rich and strange.

--William Shakespeare

 

 

 

 Adventures of Isabel

Isabel met an enormous bear,
Isabel, Isabel, didn't care;
The bear was hungry, the bear was ravenous,
The bear's big mouth was cruel and cavernous.
The bear said, Isabel, glad to meet you,
How do, Isabel, now I'll eat you!
Isabel, Isabel, didn't worry.
Isabel didn't scream or scurry.
She washed her hands and she straightened her hair up,
Then Isabel quietly ate the bear up.
Once in a night as black as pitch
Isabel met a wicked old witch.
the witch's face was cross and wrinkled,
The witch's gums with teeth were sprinkled.
Ho, ho, Isabel! the old witch crowed,
I'll turn you into an ugly toad!
Isabel, Isabel, didn't worry,
Isabel didn't scream or scurry,
She showed no rage and she showed no rancor,
But she turned the witch into milk and drank her.
Isabel met a hideous giant,
Isabel continued self reliant.
The giant was hairy, the giant was horrid,
He had one eye in the middle of his forehead.
Good morning, Isabel, the giant said,
I'll grind your bones to make my bread.
Isabel, Isabel, didn't worry,
Isabel didn't scream or scurry.
She nibbled the zwieback that she always fed off,
And when it was gone, she cut the giant's head off.
Isabel met a troublesome doctor,
He punched and he poked till he really shocked her.
The doctor's talk was of coughs and chills
And the doctor's satchel bulged with pills.
The doctor said unto Isabel,
Swallow this, it will make you well.
Isabel, Isabel, didn't worry,
Isabel didn't scream or scurry.
She took those pills from the pill concocter,
And Isabel calmly cured the doctor.

--Ogden Nash

 

The Crocodile

How doth the little crocodile

Improve his shining tail,

And pour the waters of the Nile

On every golden scale!

 

How cheerfully he seems to grin!

How neatly spread his claws,

And welcomes little fishes in

With gently smiling jaws!

--Lewis Carroll

 

Jimmy Jet And His TV Set

I'll tell you the story of Jimmy Jet --
And you know what I tell you is true.
He loved to watch his TV set
Almost as much as you.

He watched all day, he watched all night
Till he grew pale and lean,
From "The Early Show" to "The Late Late Show"
And all the shows between.

He watched till his eyes were frozen wide,
And his bottom grew into his chair.
And his chin turned into a tuning dial,
And antennae grew out of his hair.

And his brains turned into TV tubes,
And his face to a TV screen.
And two knobs saying "VERT." and "HORIZ."
Grew where his ears had been.

And he grew a plug that looked like a tail
So we plugged in little Jim.
And now instead of him watching TV
We all sit around and watch him.

--Shel Silverstein